Winning with the Last Pass

Working with someone, writers will accomplish more than they could ever do alone. An author needs others to suggest improvements and edits that the author’s eyes didn’t see. With an editor, mentor, or trusted reader, our weaknesses are covered by a helper’s strengths, and the manuscript becomes better than could ever be accomplished alone. — Ecclesiastes 4:8–9 Scripture for Writers

Writer, you will write till the writing is done,
But editing starts when you think you’ve won.
You read it again and again, then once more,
Till one final pass says, “No edits in store.”

Your eyes will catch errors you didn’t foresee,
A hiccup, a typo, perhaps a stray extra “the.”
You tighten a sentence, you polish a phrase.
You chase the clutter that hides in the haze.

But after you’ve read through and find nothing new,
No commas to shift and no phrasing to chew,
You can then shout proudly, “I’ve done all I can.”
Then you need an editor with an improvement plan.

Great editors see what an author cannot.
They spot places where author logic gets caught,
They know many pitfalls and things you don’t know.
Their fixes cover blunders so they don’t show.

A writer builds worlds with a voice bold and bright,
But editors help make the meaning read right.
Like partners who polish a gem till it gleams,
They sharpen your message and strengthen your themes.

So writer, keep editing until you’re through,
When the last perfect pass has no changes from you.
Then hand it to someone whose insights are keen—
For writing needs more editing to be truly pristine.